This is a record of my learning during my time at Gilberthorpe School.
Thursday, October 27, 2016
The Mountain Disaster!
The Mountain Disaster!
Hi, in writing we have been learning to write from pictures, the story took me 3 days and I think its really good and when you see it please comment and say if its good or not. Here are the pictures I wrote about:
Hi Sameer Ashrita here. Just wanted to say this is really good I like how you add lots of description. I like the part where there lived happily after . Hey what do think I like happily ever afters. Can't wait for the next story you write. :D
Hi Sameer Ashrita here. Just wanted to say this is really good I like how you add lots of description. I like the part where there lived happily after . Hey what do think I like happily ever afters. Can't wait for the next story you write. :D
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